( Swatantrata ka Upahar )
आए निडर हो कर वो,
किया त्याग और बलिदान ।
गर्व करते हैं हम उन पर,
जिन्होंने दी अंग्रेजों को हार ।
बापू की लाठी, आज़ाद का तेज़,
भगत का नारा और लक्ष्मीबाई की तलवार।
वो हैं हमारे वीर महान,
जिन से मिला आजादी का उपहार।
पुरनित कु. दिक्षित
कक्षा – ४ बी ( गुरुग्राम )
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Such a beautiful composition, Purnit! Keep going!
This is wonderful poem Purnit.
Thank you so much for your encouragement and love.
Awesome and a very strong poem. The rhyming words are so confidently matching with each other. Happy Independence Day.
Hey Tiya,
How beautiful to receive words of appreciation from someone equally talented. Thanks so much!
How beautiful to receive appreciation from someone who is equally talented. Thanks so much!
Thank you so much. You are equally talented and I am grateful to seek inspiration from you.
Thank you, Bhawna Gulati. Your words inspire us.
So glad to receive appreciation from someone who is equally talented. Thanks so much!
Amazing Purnit ! This is a brilliant start… keep shinning !!
Thank you so much for your words of encouragement.
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